tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5379947501376394357.post6561064635826847975..comments2023-06-23T01:40:26.324-07:00Comments on Mother of Discussion: Fishing in Lava - creative writingtoady mamahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17888878423588432520noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5379947501376394357.post-42128753182564409522012-10-09T13:20:09.525-07:002012-10-09T13:20:09.525-07:00I think the excessive sometimes goes with a lot of...I think the excessive sometimes goes with a lot of kids stories. Kids love repetition and a lot of the read aloud stories we still read have lots of repetition. I think it sounds better to them than to us. Hope this idea works for you too!toady mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17888878423588432520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5379947501376394357.post-75149822300087564852012-10-09T06:25:17.594-07:002012-10-09T06:25:17.594-07:00Even in colored type the visual break down is stri...Even in colored type the visual break down is striking, especially the use of sometimes! I love this idea and think it might help my son as well. Thanks for sharing with us over at NOBH!Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05152901528565504850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5379947501376394357.post-71987668308397272092012-10-07T16:46:19.796-07:002012-10-07T16:46:19.796-07:00Julie, Thanks I did that!Julie, Thanks I did that!toady mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17888878423588432520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5379947501376394357.post-57369758833385340632012-10-05T23:50:33.390-07:002012-10-05T23:50:33.390-07:00Loving this. Will tag so I can remember when my li...Loving this. Will tag so I can remember when my little guy gets a little older! New follower from NOBH. hope you will follow back.<br />Be blessed,<br />Julie @ Hey Mommy, Chocolate Milk<br />www.heymommychocolatemilk.blogspot.comAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746108275278660803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5379947501376394357.post-81364483320645180862012-10-04T18:56:23.256-07:002012-10-04T18:56:23.256-07:00What great ideas!! It will get him far with his wr...What great ideas!! It will get him far with his writing. Thank you for sharing at Sharing Saturday!Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13378815791158272858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5379947501376394357.post-61800349721035297042012-09-26T12:29:20.081-07:002012-09-26T12:29:20.081-07:00Thanks Carissa!Thanks Carissa!toady mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17888878423588432520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5379947501376394357.post-61103921906942517222012-09-26T12:22:11.405-07:002012-09-26T12:22:11.405-07:00wow. that's great to spend so much time and ex...wow. that's great to spend so much time and explanation about why and where there are holes in his writing logic. awesomeRasmussen Familyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09344202825556569669noreply@blogger.com